一. 用词准确;表达地道
【安徽卷高考英语】
假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：l.表示赞成。2.提出你喜欢的栏目。3.简要说明理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好。3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。4.参考单词：栏目—column
Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.
Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least,“entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.
Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【点评】
这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写得的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。
二. 非谓语动词为作文添彩
【北京卷高考英语】
情景作文
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。
注意：词数不少于60 提示词：郊区 suburbs
April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving， we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.
【点评】
本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。
三. 复合句为写作增色
【全国卷高考英语】
假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：1. 自我介绍;2. 祝贺苏琳生日;3.感谢工作人员;4. 索取苏琳三岁生日照。
注意：1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings from China!
I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【点评】本文写作的内容要点如下：1.自我介绍;2.信息来源;3.祝贺生日;4.感谢照顾;5.索取照片;6.合适的结尾。这封信格式正确，行文规范，描述有条不紊，称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语均表达到位。文章行文活泼，感情真挚，语言表述准确，洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对美方人员的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。长短句运用合理，结合了简单句和复合句，流畅自然，不露痕迹，的确是一篇佳作。
欣赏完高考满分作文是不是对英语作文跃跃欲试，熟背以下高分亮点句型并恰当运用定会为你的英语作文增色不少!
英语作文高分必背亮点句型
1.It goes without saying that......= It is obvious that......= Obviously,... 不用说/很明显，......
2. I am greatly convinced (that)… 我深信…...
3. It can be easily proved (that)… 很容易证明..….
4. There is no doubt (that)… 毫无疑问地，......
5. According to my personal experience, … 根据我个人经验，......
6. Take …for example, … 拿…...做例子，......
7. As a popular saying goes, “….” 俗话说得好，..….
8. As far as I am concerned , … 就我而言/在我看来，......
9. As for me/Personally speaking, … 在我看来，......
10. As for sth/doing sth, 至于…...
11. We must keep in mind that... 我们必须牢记…...
12. It is said/reported that… 据说/据报道…...
13. It is believed/thought that... 人们认为…...
14. It is estimated that... 据估计…...
15. It cannot be denied that... 无可否认.…..
16. It can be seen from the chart/the table that... 从图表中，我们可以看出…...
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17. The results of the survey suggests that... 调查的结果表明…...18. Some people hold the opinion that... 有些人认为......
19. Frankly speaking=to be frank,…. 坦白说，......
20. As is known to all= As we all know ，... 众所周知，......
21. Compared with...，... 和…...相比，......
22. In common with sb，... 和某人一样，......
23. with +n + to do/doing/done (此结构在句子中做伴随、原因等伴随状语)
例：With time going by ,I gradually realize the importance of health.
随着时间的流逝， 我逐渐意识到健康的重要性。
24. with + n +介词短语/形容词/副词 (此结构在句子中做状语或定语)
例：The village with trees around it used to be beautiful.
这个四周都是竹子的小村庄曾经很美丽。
25. We should take full advantage of/make full use of...，我们应该充分利用…...