谁说中国学生不会写英语作文,文言文我们都没有怕,英语作文算什么!有了下面这些个英语作文写作7原则,写出英语小作文,让你的作文bling bling亮起来,那都不是事儿!
一、长短句原则
学习还得一张一弛呢,老让阅卷老师读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
二、主题句原则
国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!所以建议大家一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然!
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句).
Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
三、一二三原则
写文章必然要通过一些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!
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1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:
其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点。
其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!
I cannot bear it.
可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
I want it.
可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.
这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。
五、多实少虚原则
写文章应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。
比如我们说很好的时候,不应该只说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。
比如走出房间
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general的词是:walk out of the room
小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
……
所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!
六、多变句式原则
1)加法(串联)
都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。
比如说: I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar. 如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
2)转折(拐弯抹角)
写作的时候,在要点之前先写点别的,注意二者之间的联系就够了。
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The coat was thin, but it was warm.
更多短语:despite that, still, despite,nevertheless, in spite of, not with standing
3)因果(so, so, so)
讲故事的时候要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
The snow began to fall, so we went home.
更多短语:then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4)附加
在写作时,用上定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语,效果会更好。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
5)排比(排山倒海句)
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引用一个个的排比句、对偶句、不定式……如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
七、挑战极限原则
既然是挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。
比如:
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of china.