2023年高考新高考I卷(英语)-写作

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2023年高考新高考I卷

第一节 (满分15分)

46. 假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括;

1. 说明问题;

2. 提出建议。

注意:

1. 写作词数应为80个左右:

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

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Dear Ryan,

I’m Li Hua from Class 3.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Ryan,

I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.

To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.

My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.

Thank you for considering my suggestion.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

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【导语】本篇是应用文写作,要求考生给外教写一封邮件,告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

首先:to begin with → first of all

提高:improve → progress

建议:suggestion → advice

选择:choose → select

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句:My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.

拓展句:My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.

【点睛】[高分句型1]

This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.(运用了现在分词作状语)

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[高分句型2]

Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.(运用了省略句和who引导定语从句)

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