一、正确使用标点符号
(1)说话人+说话内容
“说”后用逗号， 引号内第一个字母大写，句尾标点符号放在引号内。
He said,“You are my best friend!”
(2) 说话内容+说话人
陈述句引号内用逗号， 引号外第一个字母小写：疑问句或感叹句引号内用问号或感叹号， 引号外第一个字母小写。且“某人说”可以写作“sb.said”也可以写作“said sb.”。
① "Yes," he said.
②"You may both go," said Andy.
③"Don't move," she said to Mike in a soft voice.
(3)说话内容+说话人+说话内容
“某人说”可以写作“sb.said”也可以写作“said sb.”:
“某人说”前面引号内用逗号，引号外第一个字母小写。
“某人说”后面如果用句号，则后面引号内第一个字母大写;
“某人说”后面如果用逗号，则后面引号内第一个字母小写。
①“That's cool,”he said.“Can I have a try?”
②“You'd better let me go,”teased her twin brother, William.“There are dangers all over this place.”
③“You can go any place you want,”Amy said,“but I think you'll find what you need.”
二、避免重复使用 say
在进行语言描写时很多同学全部都只用“said”这一个单词，这样使得句子重复呆板，因此要学会灵活多变的各种“说”。
explain 解释
state 陈述
protest 抗议
sob哭诉
insist 坚持
comfort安慰
repeat 重复
agree同意
order命令
scream 尖叫
promise承诺
whisper 耳语
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yell/shout 大叫
declare 声称
add 补充
assure 保证
complain 抱怨
apologise 道歉
announce 宣告
argue 争论
interrupt 打断
beg 请求
demand 要求
mock 嘲讽
claim 声称
cry/exclaim 喊叫
suggest/advise 建议
stammer/stutter/stumble 结巴
ask /inquire 询问
reply/answer/respond回答
1.“Christine !照顾好你弟弟!”母亲高声喊道。
“Christine! Take care of your young brother!”Mother shouted at the top of her voice.
2.“Hannah，你知道她在哪儿吗?她怎么样?请告诉我。”他恳求道。
"Hannah, do you know where she is? How is she? Please tell me."He begged.
3.“报纸上有一个圣诞愿望竞赛。”Amy的妈妈宣布，“给圣诞老人写封信可能会得奖。”
“There's a Christmas wish con test on the newspaper,”Amy's mom announced.“Write a letter to Santa, and you might win a prize.”
三、如何让对话更生动
第一类
“……,”sb said in a …voice/tone.某人以…的声音、 语气说到
in a pleasant tone/voice 以一种愉悦的声音/语气
in a firm tone/voice以一种坚定的声音/语气
in a rude tone/voice以一种粗鲁的声音/语气
in a sad tone/voice 以一种悲伤的声音/语气
也可以用 in a voice/tone of+名词的搭配
in a tone/voice of surprise 用一种惊讶的语气
in a tone/voice of curiosity 用一种好奇的语气
in a tone/voice of impatience 用一种不耐烦的语气
in a tone/voice of command用一种命令的语气
1.“你一定是安妮吧?”他用友好的语气说。
“You must be Annie,”he said in a friendly tone.
2.“我很乐意。”艾米莉用愉快的语气说。
“I would love to.”said Emily in a pleasant tone.
3.“我不想和你一起去。”艾米丽用不耐烦的语气说。
“I don't want to go with you.”said Emily in a tone of impatience.
4.“不，我没有告诉他这个秘密。”他用低沉的语调说.
“No, I didn’t tell him the secret.”he said in a low tone.
第二类
“xxx,”sb said in/with+心情类名词.某人以…的心情说道……
1.“You are safe,”Tom cried with excitement.
“你安全啦!”Tom 激动地说道。
2.“I hate you!”she screamed in anger.
“我讨厌你!”她生气地大喊道。
3.“What a lovely rabbit,”I said in astonishment.
“好可爱的兔子啊!”我诧异地说到。
4.“Nice to meet you,”he said with enthusiasm.
“很高兴认识你。”他热情地说。
第三类
“xxx,”sb said +adv..+doing.(添加非谓语动词表达后续动作)
1.“我去给我们拿点咖啡。”她温柔地说道，朝厨房走去。
“I'll get us some coffee,” she said gently, heading for the kitchen.
2.“我再也不相信你了。”他生气地大喊道，砰的一声关上门。
“I don't believe you anymore.”He yelled angrily, slamming the door.
3.“我被狼袭击了，我以为再也见不到你了。”麦克激动地说，紧紧抱住他们。
“I was attacked by a wolf and I thought I would never see you again.”Mike said excitedly.hugging them tightly.
第四类
sb did sth.did sth and said“xxx.” (添加动作链)
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He stopped the taxi, jumped in with the suitcase and told the driver.“Go to the police station,please.”
2.她冲上前去，跪在地上，喃喃地说：“对不起，我的宝贝。”
She dashed forward.knelt down and murmured," I'm sorry, my baby.”
3.我匆忙穿上衣服，拿起包说：“请等一下我!”
I put on my clothes hurriedly, grabbed my bag and said."Please wait for me!"
Translation
1.“没人能理解我!”安迪哽咽着， 双手掩面。
“Nobody could understand me!”Andy sobbed, burying his face in his hands.
2.农夫抱起狗，跪下来，轻声说：“现在是你的了。”
The farmer picked up the dog, knelt down and said in a soft voice,“It's yours now.”
3.她眼里噙着泪水说：“对不起。”
With tears in her eves, she said,“Sorry.”
4.“嗨， 兰迪。我对意大利面条的事感到抱歉。”凯瑟琳低声道歉， 脸涨红了。
“Hi, Landy.I'm sorry about the spaghetti thing.”Catherine murmured an apology, her face reddening.
5.“看!”罗斯指着窗户，激动地喊道。
“Look!”Rose pointed out the window and cried in great excitement.
6.“想试一下吗?”我抚摸着玛丽娜的手说。
“Want to try one on?”I said, touching Marina's hand.
7.我打开窗户对着对面喊道。“我知道我们以前见过面， 但我不记得在哪里了。”。
I opened my window and shouted across,“I know we've met before, but I can't remember where.”
8.“想试一下吗?”我抚摸着玛丽娜的手说。
“Want to try one on?”I said, touching Marina's hand.
来源：高考英语
编辑：小林